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Silas Hatcher's avatar

Ooh I love this. it reminds me of something I once wrote. But this is much better.

Aidan Alan's avatar

I’d like to see what you wrote

Silas Hatcher's avatar

Lol it might be a while before that sees the light of day. It was my second set of stories.

imi's avatar
Aug 2Edited

Amazing Aidan! I think you’re much more of poet than you think you are. It’s impossible not to think that after reading this prose. I really enjoyed it. Brought a lot of things to my mind, borrowed selves, indifference turning into performative grief… such a lingering piece

Aidan Alan's avatar

Thank you for reading Imi

I.P's avatar

Aidan your prose is unlike anything I’ve ever read I’m always transported into a different world I absolutely love it ❤️

Aidan Alan's avatar

Thank you❤️ I am sorry I insulted your man’s pronunciation

Darker Ink's avatar

I could relate to this so much that it was difficult to finish. You did an amazing job of describing the feelings of hiding behind someone you're not. Thank you for sharing this.

Michelle's avatar

Beautiful and heartbreaking

Sincerely Seb's avatar

Creepy and philosophical at the same time. Love it