What a fucking rollercoaster! This was awesome. You don't know who to side with at first, flipflopping from one to another. The perspective switching is very strong. And the prose, man, it's great.
That’s awesome. The call and answer from differing perspectives came off really well. I loved the double twist and the open ending is exceedingly deftly done. It has a real narrative drive (excuse the pun) to it. Very much enjoyed reading that both!
Well done Aidan and Kiwi!
And woman!
Thanks Kyle
@Kiwi’s Stories..I fixed my comment lol. I read the story and forgot it was a collab. Again, bravo.
😂
Her name is @Kiwi’s Stories, Aidan. Have some respect! ;)
He just used me for a collab, it’s ok 🥲
Thanks Kyle!!! 🤩
lol sorry…such a player.
Welcome! :)
What a fucking rollercoaster! This was awesome. You don't know who to side with at first, flipflopping from one to another. The perspective switching is very strong. And the prose, man, it's great.
I would very much like to know what kind of spell this was.
Excellent job on the story telling.
She was trying to eat my soul or something
Trying to steal his soul, though I kind of wanted to do something with necromancy but maybe another time 🤔
That’s awesome. The call and answer from differing perspectives came off really well. I loved the double twist and the open ending is exceedingly deftly done. It has a real narrative drive (excuse the pun) to it. Very much enjoyed reading that both!
We did great work, thank you MP
Aidan’s choice in ending, it was a good call 😌 thanks MP😁
Wooo
Woo wooo
Wasn’t expecting this on my feed. A piece as good as this doesn’t deserve any other day of the month but the first!
Thanks Matthew!!
Excellent tension building. Very cinematic 🖤
Thank you!
Thank you sir! 😁
Awesome collab! Well done, y’alls 💜👾
Thanks love 💜
Very nice
Very good y'all. Very very good.
Thanks love!!
She bewitched me into writing a collab with her